Today I´m going to talk about my last entry on the blog, but first I have to remember one of the important things that we saw in class, the best option for the use of Lang 8 is to correct as much possible entries of other guys to win stars, when you have a lot of stars generally the answer on your publications are best.
For example, this was my last entry on Lang 8.
So, I have to put my corrections like this:
"Now I´m going to talk about corruption in Mexico.
Mexico has a lot of problems with corruption so I thinl that the first thing the government has to do is change their institutions because it´s incredible how bad the process is in some cases. For example, with the Ayotzinapan case the Mexican Government didn´t do anything. That´s why it received a lot of recommendations from United Nations (UN)."
One of the things that I learned with this corrections were:
1. Put a complete names of whatever organism.
2. Don´t forget the person who is talking about(in this case Mexico)
3. Separate ideas
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