In this time I had ony one answer about my entry, regularly when you post a corrections in others entries you have the opportunity to have more corrections but this week was difficult because I had a lot of homework.

Some of the mistakes that I can look in this corrections were:

1. To be more expresive in the sentences

2. Correct use of adjectives (She said "Cloudy")

3. Use of past perfect

The correction could be:

"It´s been a long time since I´ve written because I have had a very complicated past few weeks in college, I had every difficult exams so I had to study so much but I´m here again. Today we are going to talk about "Global warming". Now a days, this is a very common concept but the results of this situation are very clear.

Last week we had very rare days because in only one day we had a rainbow, storm, sunny and cloudy day."

 

Another of my bestfriends in Tandem is Amanda, with this girl I talk in the night for the difference between Brazil and Mexico, she has a lot of dreams and she has plans to come to Mexico to know Cancun, that is why I told that one option on Cancun is Holbox, that is an amazing beach, it´s a paradise and you can stay in direct contact with the nature.

I can talk a lot of thing with her because we study in the same area, sometimes she said that the situation in Brazil it´s difficult because have a bipolar society. One part of Brazil is so poor but in other side have the best places when the people have a lot of money. In topics like corruption Amanda said that is the same situation that the mexicans had and this is very sad because it´s a country very rich in other things, the problem is the control of the government or the work of institutions.

[[CORRECTIONS OF THE ENTRY]]

Another of my best friends in Tandem is Amanda; I regularly talk with in the night for the difference between Brazil and Mexico. She has many dreams and she has plans to come to Mexico to know Cancun; that is why I invited her to Holbox; is an amazing beach, it´s a paradise and you can stay in direct contact with the nature.

I´d like to talk with her because we are studying in the same area; sometimes she said that the situation of Brazil it´s difficult because they have a bipolar society. One part of Brazil is so poor but in other side have the best places, for example, the people in some regions have a lot of money.

In topics like corruption, Amanda said is the same situation that the Mexicans had and this is very sad because it´s a country very rich in other things like culture, food, traditions, etc., the problem is the control of the government and the bad activities inside the institutions.

Sarah is one of my favorite person to talked because with her I can practice my english and portuguese, regularly I talk with her in portuguese but I prefered to talk in english to practice, 

She likes to practice two idioms, spanish and english, is a student of publicity and international marketing in the University of Anhanguera on Brazil.

Sarah loves to talk about publicity, music, arts, reading (novels) and she likes dance and sing a lot of music. She doesn´t have boyfriend but she is sating a guy  for 5 month, I think that she is falling in love but she doesn´t accepted that. Regularly I talked with her on whatsapp because sometimes "TANDEM" is very slow.

This new kind of do the exams I really like because you can support with your partner to do in the best way the weekly exam, In this examen I was with my friend Lulú, I thing that in general we have the same ideas with the reading but the part that was diffcult for both was the last part.

The problem was that the instructions were: "In a small paragraph summarize the paper and write your own reflections/ opinion on the conclusions and suggestions give. (This question is worth five credits)"

Of course, Lulú and me had differents opions about the reading and we had differents conclusions with the principal ideas, so Lulu think that one part was interesting but maybe this part was simple for me, so we have to fix this part for mix the ideas of Lulu with my opinion. 

Then when we talked with the teacher all the gruop said that was diffcult this part because the reading have different ideas that were important but we only have to do a summarize of all. This kind of problem  also occurs in reflection of our careers , in this case , Lulu is a student of Engineering and I´m a student of International Affairs. Perhaps I see more the angle of society and Lulu was looking for something more concrete and practical to help understand reading in a simple summary .

This weekly exam was easy because I used a nice type of learning to know the words, the only fact that I think that was difficcult to end my exam was the time because I have a ceremony of Bachelor´s Degree soI had to leave early; that is why I had two mistakes.

In general, it was easy learned this words because I´m a visual learner, so 

what I did was use work cards and put images with different colors to remember the meanings making analogies. Some words was known for my but others was new. that is why I studied 2 days before for the exam.