In this time I had ony one answer about my entry, regularly when you post a corrections in others entries you have the opportunity to have more corrections but this week was difficult because I had a lot of homework.
Some of the mistakes that I can look in this corrections were:
1. To be more expresive in the sentences
2. Correct use of adjectives (She said "Cloudy")
3. Use of past perfect
The correction could be:
"It´s been a long time since I´ve written because I have had a very complicated past few weeks in college, I had every difficult exams so I had to study so much but I´m here again. Today we are going to talk about "Global warming". Now a days, this is a very common concept but the results of this situation are very clear.
Last week we had very rare days because in only one day we had a rainbow, storm, sunny and cloudy day."

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